Chapter Five: The Custodian (Part 4)
Scene 4 — The Scroll That Was Never Filed
The chamber was shaped like an ellipsis.
Not quite round, not quite square-three soft curves where there should’ve been corners. The walls were thick with scroll tubes, relic folders, and slotted memories bound in twine. Every inch was documented, labeled, re-labeled. Most bore no author.
Only verdicts.
“To be sorted.”
“Deferred.”
“Still becoming.”
A single window overlooked nothing, just a patch of fog that pulsed faintly like a library breath. A small candle sat on the sill, never melting, its flame perfectly still. The figure behind the desk moved slowly, like someone writing into damp air. Every motion was deliberate. Every line final.
Bramble didn’t sit. There were no chairs. Just standing space and one goat, who had wandered to a shelf and was sniffing a pile of outdated revelation permits. It looked vaguely ill.
The figure dipped its quill. “You left this part behind,” it said.
Its voice was not Bramble’s. Not exactly. It was older in shape, younger in tone. The sound of something held too long in silence.
“When the oath passed to you, I stayed here. To finish the filing.”
Bramble crossed his arms. “You’re not real.”
“Neither are most truths until they’re written down.”
It gestured to the wall behind it where one scroll sat apart from the rest. Bound in crimson cord. Stamped not once, but twice. Kaldrith’s seal.
And beneath it:
“DO NOT FILE.”
Bramble stared. “Why hasn’t it been processed?”
The figure smiled, soft and bitter. “Because Kaldrith never finished writing it.”
“He made the vow in full presence. But he left no clause. No contingency. No signature. Just a promise. A god’s promise.”
Bramble looked down. The floor beneath him was not stone, but paper: a hundred overlapping pages, some familiar, some in languages no longer spoken. He could see phrases from old sermons. Lines from letters he never sent. Scribbled confessions from long nights in too many chapels. All beneath his boots. All kept.
The figure watched him. Its eyes were empty. But not void. Filed. “You’re not here to finish what Kaldrith started,” it said. “You’re here to feel it.”
Bramble frowned. “Feel what?”
The figure rose slowly. It stood just like him. Older. Thinner. Fewer lines on the face. More around the eyes. It stepped around the desk and placed one ink-stained hand on Bramble’s shoulder.
“The weight of a god who didn’t want to be worshipped. Only remembered.”
Bramble didn’t pull away. Didn’t speak. Behind them, the scroll labeled DO NOT FILE trembled once—a breeze from nowhere rifling the cord. And far above, back beyond the threshold and the path and the Holdfast and the hills, the world of prayers and permissions paused. Just slightly. As if listening. The scroll trembled again. Not violently. Just enough. Like something clearing its throat before being spoken aloud.
Bramble stepped toward it. The figure, his shadow-self, or echo, or archivist twin, didn’t move. It simply watched, ink-stained hands folded behind its back. The goat remained near the far shelf, silent, as if struck momentarily devout. Its eyes tracked Bramble like an old priest watching a child pick up the chalice too early.
Bramble stood before the scroll. The seal was clear. Kaldrith’s mark, twice stamped.
Once as creator.
Once as witness.
Below the second mark, barely visible, a third impression lingered—not a sigil, but a fingerprint. Pressed in blood, ink, or something more sacred. Bramble’s. From a time he didn’t remember. Or tried not to.
The cord binding the scroll was not knotted. It was looped. Like it wanted to be unwrapped. He reached out. His fingers hovered just above the edge.
“You don’t have to open it,” the figure said behind him.
Bramble didn’t look back. “But I do.”
“Why?”
He swallowed. Then answered, quiet and steady: “Because Kaldrith filed everything, even what he couldn’t keep. But this…”
He touched the scroll. “This, he kept.”
He unlooped the cord. The seal cracked. No glow. No gust. Just a breath. Like the page itself had been waiting to exhale. He unrolled it slowly. Inside: one sentence. Handwritten. Sharp. Careful. Final. He read it aloud.
“I swore to carry what could not be forgotten, even if it was never mine to hold.”
Silence. Then, beneath the sentence, a second line. Newer ink. Fresher. A reply. Not in Kaldrith’s hand. His own.
“Then let it be remembered.”
The scroll burned. The text dissolved into the air, and for the briefest moment, Bramble saw everything:
— A god kneeling before a vow too old to break.
— A temple emptied by time, still echoing.
— A young paladin swearing out of spite, and still meaning every word.
— A goat, chewing sacred parchment like it was entitled to.
Then it was gone. The scroll. The room. The figure. Gone. He stood again on the path. The door behind him closed, not with force, but finality. The goat was beside him. He looked down. In his hand: a single thread of crimson cord. Still warm. Still binding. He tucked it away. Looked ahead.
And for the first time in a long while, the road waited for him—not with prophecy.
With permission.
FOOTNOTE BY — THE WRITER:
Some oaths are made aloud.
Some are sworn in silence.
The oldest ones are neither:
They are kept.
Not because they’re sacred.
Not because they’re right.
But because someone, somewhere,
never stopped carrying them.
Kaldrith’s last vow was never filed.
Not because it was incomplete.
It was just too heavy to shelve
and too dangerous to forget.
That’s why it chose Bramble.
Not as a hero.
Not as a prophet.
But as a man too stubborn
to put it down.







I love these 🙏🏼 (and the goat!).